The Write Way Café welcomes Paul Thaler, who encourages writers not to let others limit your aspirations.
So let’s start off on an honest note. For a new writer—actually
for any writer outside of the likes of John Grisham—the road to publishing a
novel is not only filled with potholes but fissures large enough to swallow up
the most resilient of us. Okay, a bit dramatic of a start for this advice
column, but you get the idea. I speak from my own travails of the past six
years in which I went through two major revisions of my novel only to confront
“the industry” when I set out to publish. Even with two well regarded
nonfiction books to my credit, Bronxland
was a tough sell to agents or publishing houses (as much as I was tempted to
change my name to Grisham). I was fortunate enough to come upon a small press,
Black Opal Books (BOB), that took to the manuscript. BOB has been great in fact,
moving the novel into paperback, digital and, most recently, hardcover. The
added perk has been their authors’ online forum where BOB writers daily
commiserate and offer advice and support. So, I was fortunate. Still, the
journey has left its battle scars, but also a modicum of wisdom about the
writing and publishing process. Take what you may from these “lessons.” I’ll
only preface them to encourage you to keep at it, not that we as writers have a
choice anyway.
Lesson 1: First, some practical advice. Find a writing
schedule that fits your personality, one that keeps you sane. I am always
interested in how writers write. Stephen King, for one, mentions that he works
a four-hour morning shift, with the intention of putting out 1500 words each
day. He’s done pretty well for himself following that regimen. I must admit
that I follow a slightly different track immersed at times in 16-hour writing
days–so I’m not a great example of the sane school of writing. In noting my
addiction, I would still advise to separate yourself from your writing at times,
take a break. You’ll be surprised in looking at your previous paragraphs and
pages through fresh eyes to see what works or not.
Lesson 2: Don’t fall too heavily in love with your original
book idea—be open to new ones. Like all journeys into the unknown, writing a
book has its own surprises—and writers must be ready to adjust. Bronxland actually started out as a
memoir, and after spending two years I thought I had nailed down my final draft—clearly
a brilliant coming-of-age autobiography. That is, until I heard back from my
writing colleagues who collectively offered their opinion—in short, that I
should tuck the book into a desk drawer, and forget about it. Okay, not kind
advice – but they were right. I had written a book heavy in narcissism with
limited reader appeal (save for a family member or two, and even then if I was lucky).
So, Bronxland was finally born – a novel
where I could meld my autobiographical musings into a more appealing flight of
imagination for readers. Of course, I wish I had come to that realization and
that story earlier —but such is sometimes the bi-roads in the writing journey
we sign up for.
Lesson 3: Pay
attention to the voice and personality of your characters. I know, standard
advice for the craft. But too often new and even experienced novelists become
so immersed in the narrative and twisty plot scenarios that they lose sight of
their characters. When we think back to a book that resonates, it is more often
the human element that sticks. I cannot tell you much of anything about Jack
Reacher’s exploits even as his avid reader—but Lee Child has created an iconic
character that holds up even when his story lines falter. My reviewers generally
speak in positive terms about the narrative in Bronxland but seem especially ramped up by “memorable” characters
involved in the novel (and nice to hear, of course)—and a reason to care and
commit to those 300 pages. This is not to say that the narrative arc of your story
isn’t important—of course it is—but the “voices” that come alive are especially
vital to the life-blood of your novel. So, breathe life into them.
Lesson 4: You don’t need a computer to write. In fact,
typically that’s not where our stories come from. Which brings me to Jack
Nicholson in The Shining. While most
of us remember this epic horror film for Nicholson’s wonderfully terrifying
performance, there is a moment when his character nails the writer’s mindset.
Nicholson, an aspiring writer, is sitting, still and silent, at a desk in a
vast, empty space at the Overlook Hotel. A sheaf of blank paper rests at the
side of his typewriter. He has not written a single word, as his wife, Shelley
Duvall approaches and timidly asks why, in fact, he isn’t writing. Nicholson,
in all his crocodile-smile madness, replies, tapping the top of his head, “This is writing. . .”, then pointing to
the typewriter, “This is typing.”
Nicholson had it right, that as writers we are always writing even when we
aren’t. We need time to think but also to engage the world. Our creative minds
need that oxygen. Years ago I met up with the writer, Pete Hamill. He always
seemed to be jotting something down in a journal he always carried with him. When
I finally inquired just what it was he was taking note of, he shrugged,
replying that you never know when something hits that finds its way into your next
book. Since that talk, I always carry around my own pad.
Lesson 5: Writing requires long patience—and backbone.
Understand that you are in for the long haul, and it can be something of a
scary ride. And one not for the faint of heart. After all, as writers, we work
in isolation with that underlying fear that no will ever care or take notice of
what we have to say on our pages. Some writers finally do opt out, their
stories never seeing the light of day. But for the brave among us, perseverance
is key. Writing the book is only a first step—but certainly not the only one. Whatever
the romantic view of our creative process, the reality is that we are also
sales-marketing people, trying to win over agents, publishers, reviewers, and
readers. Voluminous marketing advice exists on the web ranging from the good to
the not-so-great. I won’t step into those deep waters here, but a personal
caution. I avoid paying anyone to read a manuscript, or to review my book, or any
other such marketing “promises.” Other writers may disagree, but this
monetizing of the industry is something that has gotten out of hand. I am,
however, a huge fan of writer-friendly bloggers and sites that have a
supportive heart (and thank you The Write Way Café!).
An extra lesson, if you don’t mind. Whatever, your writing choices,
as in life, don’t let others limit your aspirations. If you feel it, then that
is your challenge. The writer’s life can
be insane, but it is like walking the high wire—yes, dangerous, but the view up
there is magnificent. Take it in.
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Welcome to Bronxland
by Paul Thaler—and this uproarious and heartrending coming of age novel
set in the Bronx circa '60s. Paul Wolfenthal is a peculiar 13-year-old
kid grappling with the absurdities of his young Bronx life circa 1960.
He visits the dead, hears voices in his head, despises Richard Nixon, is
infatuated with his Marilyn Monroe look-alike math teacher, and is a
choice victim for the neighborhood’s sadistic bully. And then Paul
really starts running into trouble.
Paul is, in fact, a kid in search of heroes, alive and otherwise, and finds them in John Kennedy and Harry Houdini, both of whom cross into his life. But these are strange and even dangerous times. Hovering in the shadows are “the demons” that haunt Paul’s young childhood dreams, only to come alive and shatter his world. One steals away a neighborhood child. And then his president.
Set against the turbulent history of the times, Bronxland tugs on a kaleidoscope of emotions. A place of the heart known to all of us, with our own story to tell of growing up, of trying to make sense of our life, with everything that comes along.
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Paul is, in fact, a kid in search of heroes, alive and otherwise, and finds them in John Kennedy and Harry Houdini, both of whom cross into his life. But these are strange and even dangerous times. Hovering in the shadows are “the demons” that haunt Paul’s young childhood dreams, only to come alive and shatter his world. One steals away a neighborhood child. And then his president.
Set against the turbulent history of the times, Bronxland tugs on a kaleidoscope of emotions. A place of the heart known to all of us, with our own story to tell of growing up, of trying to make sense of our life, with everything that comes along.
https://www.facebook.com/WelcometoBronxland
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/36534843-bronxland
https://blackopalbooks.com/bronxland/
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Paul Thaler is a former journalist and the author of the critically acclaimed The Spectacle: Media and the Making of the OJ Simpson Story, and The Watchful Eye: American Justice in the Age of the Television Trial. Bronxland is his debut novel, released (October 2017) by Black Opal Books. In addition to his writings, Paul has also been an on-air media commentator for numerous television cable news programs and documentaries including those on CNN and HBO. He holds both a Masters of Arts in Journalism and a Ph.D. in Communications from New York University. Paul is a longtime resident of the Bronx, New York, where he lives with his wife, Amy, and their three children, Matthew, Robby and Rebecca.
