The Write Way Café welcomes Augustina Van Hoven, who shares tips for making characters as real as the neighbors.
The heart of any story is its characters. No matter how interesting or compelling the plot, if the reader doesn’t connect with your characters, they will stop reading your book.
To be a memorable character your creation needs to feel like a real person, someone your reader wants to get to know and care about. I have found that creating a well-rounded character is a lot like building a house, the first thing you need is a good frame.
I like to begin by casting an actor or actress in the role of the character I need for my story. This person becomes the basic frame of my character. The handy thing about actors and actresses is that there are usually lots of pictures of them in various roles available on the internet. This way you get to see your characters different facial expressions and gestures. An actor, unless he is playing a character with a physical handicap, will walk a certain way; have a special set to his shoulders, a unique smile. These are all characteristics I can use to create the physical appearance of my character. An actor can dye his hair, wear makeup or contacts, and as a writer you can change or adjust any feature of your character. Remember the actor is merely a starting point. Any features or changes you make need to be carefully recorded on your character sheets. Readers notice when your hero’s eyes suddenly go from brown to blue.
The next part of a house is the walls and roof. For a character it is their personality traits and quirks. A good way to create this part of your character is to assign him or her a birthday and look up the personality traits associated with that day in horoscope books. This gives you a great list of traits like autocratic, passionate, fiery temper, introverted, sympathetic, a bully, respectful, etc. You get the idea. Add to this, skills and talents the character will need to survive in the world where your story takes place and you have a good foundation for his personality. Don’t forget to add flaws to your characters. No one is perfect; your character shouldn’t be either. A real person makes mistakes, has a temper, says something stupid or makes bad choices. Your characters need to do the same to be believable.
Finally, finishing the interior of the house, for a character, this is backstory. What needs to happen to your character in the past in order to turn them into the person they are at the beginning of your book? Each of us has a history of life experiences that have shaped us into the people we are today. It is the same for your character. The loss of a parent at a young age, surviving a house fire, being mugged, winning the lottery, major occurrences can shape a person in a positive or negative way. The events don’t necessarily need to be traumatic; they can be small like being the quiet one or the smart one in class. Regardless of what you decide to use, you need to record it on your character sheet and figure out how this will affect your characters actions and decisions in your book. Unless the back story is significant to the plot, it shouldn’t appear in the book, but you as an author need to know it.
The more you know about your character before you begin writing the easier it is to anticipate how they will react to the twists and stumbling blocks you put in their way. This also helps keep the story flowing in the right direction and eliminates major edits and rewrites.
A great character is a fictional person who is as real to the reader as the neighbor across the street. Someone she will cheer for, cry with, worry over and want to read about again and again.
Augustina Van Hoven
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Augustina Van Hoven was born in The Netherlands and currently resides in the Pacific Northwest with her husband, two dogs and three cats. She is an avid reader of romance, science fiction and fantasy. When she’s not writing she likes to work in her garden or in the winter months crochet and knit on her knitting machines.
Winding Down 2015
As 2015 comes to a close, we would like to thank you for being a part of The Write Wy Café!
Authors have generously given their time, sharing their lives and their stories. Readers have responded by leaving comments. We've heard from many people who have been referred to our blog by their author or reader friends, and that feels like a huge compliment to us! It's a good feeling to know we are able to help promote fellow authors.
We hope you will keep visiting in 2016!
Authors, we still have a few openings for Tuesdays and Thursdays, April through June. If you are interested, please email us at thewritewaycafe@gmail.com.
Do you know of an aspiring author who might like to be featured? Send them our way!
And remember...
Tomorrow is the first blank page of a 365 page book. Write a good one.
Authors have generously given their time, sharing their lives and their stories. Readers have responded by leaving comments. We've heard from many people who have been referred to our blog by their author or reader friends, and that feels like a huge compliment to us! It's a good feeling to know we are able to help promote fellow authors.
We hope you will keep visiting in 2016!
Authors, we still have a few openings for Tuesdays and Thursdays, April through June. If you are interested, please email us at thewritewaycafe@gmail.com.
Do you know of an aspiring author who might like to be featured? Send them our way!
And remember...
Tomorrow is the first blank page of a 365 page book. Write a good one.
- Brad Paisley
We wish you a safe and Happy New Year!
- Lynn and HiDee
My Night Before Christmas
'Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the house,
Not a creature was stirring...
Whoa. Wait. Stop right there!
I would love to be nestled all snug in my bed, with visions of publication dancing in my head. Alas, it is not to be. Not yet anyway...
There is food to be prepared. Those who know me well know that I don't cook. Well, I cook very little. Hubby is the cook in this household and I will gladly wash dishes to avoid cooking. However, since we are hosting my family at my house, I am expected to participate in cooking. I ask family members to bring a dish to share, hubby takes care of the meats, and I prepare the dishes I'm good at: potato salad, deviled eggs and no-bake cookies. Hey, I could live on those items if I had to!
There is cleaning to be done. Vacuum the carpet. Sweep and mop the kitchen floor. Dust the visible places. Polish my wooden dining room table to a shine! And then comes the fun part: watching hubby and kids try not to wipe out as they walk sock-footed across the also-polished floor beside the table. Hehehehe... Sock-skating at its best!
There are presents to wrap. Last minute gifts...or not. Gifts I hid in a safe place. Hm....I know I had something else for so-and-so. What did I do with it? Ah, yes! Now that I tore the house apart looking for those gifts, I find them somewhere I should have looked first. Ah, well. At least I found them. Nobody will be short a present! Out come all the wrapping supplies that hubby earlier declared we were done with. Silly men...
And last but not least, there is Santa to play! My kids may be grown but some traditions must continue. So after everybody goes to bed, hubby drags out the wrapping supplies one last time - and hopefully kept one roll of paper just for Santa! I spread out on the floor at the opposite end of the house from the bedrooms, wrap the Santa gifts, and fill the stockings. About an hour after the rest of the family has gone to bed, I can finally crawl beneath the covers myself.
Now I can nestle all snug in my bed. It's been a long day! If creatures are stirring I probably won't hear them, because I'm too worn out to finish my own night before Christmas story. So here are some Night Before Christmas stories I found online, just for writers!
Tuesday Special: Cheryl Rees-Price and The Silent Quarry
Cheryl Rees-Price
The Silent Quarry is the first in the DI Winter Meadows series by Cheryl Rees-Price.
In 1987 a quiet Welsh village was devastated by a brutal attack on two schoolgirls, Bethan Hopkins and Gwen Collier. Only Gwen survived, with horrific injuries and no memory of the attack. The killer was never caught.
Now, nearly thirty years later, Gwen has gone missing and DI Winter Meadows is assigned to the case. Charismatic and intuitive, he has an uncanny gift for finding the truth. But in this small and close-knit community, the past is never far away, and those who have secrets will go to any lengths to keep them. Tensions run high as old feelings and accusations are stirred. And DI Meadows has to battle his own demons as he uncovers a truth he wished had stayed in the past …
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About Cheryl:
Cheryl Rees-Price was born in Cardiff and moved as a Young child to a small ex-mining village on the edge of the Black Mountains, South Wales, where she still lives with her husband, daughters and two cats. After leaving school she worked as a legal clerk for several years before leaving to raise her two daughters.
Cheryl returned to education, studying philosophy, sociology and accountancy whilst working as a part time book keeper. She now works as a finance director for a company that delivers project management and accounting services and sits on the board of a local circus company.
In her spare time Cheryl indulges in her passion for writing, the success of writing plays for local performances gave her the confidence to write her first novel. Her other hobbies include walking and gardening which free her mind to develop plots and create colourful characters.
An Interview with Amy Olle
The Write Way Café welcomes Amy Olle, whose writing journey has been filled with unexpected surprises.
When did you first have the thought you'd like to write a book? Was that first thought related to writing romance?
After I finished the long, difficult slog that writing my graduate thesis entailed, I wanted to read something less academic and more entertaining. I picked up Outlander and discovered the genius of romance novels. Oddly enough, Outlander is not shelved in the romance section at bookstores and libraries, so in my hunt for similar works, I read lots of fantastic historical fiction and fantasy. Eventually, I found the romance section and discovered the many brilliant historical romance writers there. I was hooked. I don’t know if you’ve heard (;-)), but romance readers are voracious readers. I can attest to that! After a year and probably a hundred or more romance novels, I’d become that stereotypical budding writer with my head full of elaborate daydreams, mini-stories, or snippets of scenes. One day, while reading a Susan Elizabeth Phillips novel, I thought, I want to write a book like this. Just a pure, simple wish and so, so naïve!
What was your path to getting this book written and published? What type of research did you do?
I wrote Beautiful Ruin, start to finish, at least three separate times. Technically, it’s the first book I’ve written, but in truth, I’ve written three complete manuscripts, all with the same premise and two of which are an abomination to the craft, before producing this last version of Noah and Mina’s story. It took me years to learn story structure (A plot? What’s that? Do I need one?) and to discover my writing process (still discovering). During those years of writing and rewriting, I moved across the country, started a new job - twice, had a baby, and lost my dad to illness. Sometimes, I think about that naïve wish to write a romance novel, and then I start laughing.
Where did the idea for your story come from?
I can’t pinpoint the exact moment this story idea occurred to me. Instead, it sort of evolved over time as I wrote (and rewrote). I knew I wanted to write about a woman struggling with a past trauma, and ultimately, I wanted it to be a story of healing and redemption. From there, I just wrote. Not something I would advise, by the way (see previous answer). J
Why did you pick the setting you did?
I lived in the south (Georgia) for several years while attending graduate school, but I always pined for my home in Michigan. Mainly, I missed my family and friends, but also I missed the little things about the state where I’d grown up. I missed the way it smells. I missed the four distinct, oftentimes intense, seasons. I missed the beaches, the freshwater lakes, the quaint harbor towns. I missed the vibe. We have two Big Ten universities within an hour of each other. Of course, we’re bitter rivals (football and basketball season are particularly exciting!), but it’s created this diverse community of intellects and scholars, students, and working class families. The film industry is growing in the state and has only enriched the already large community of writers and artists. Michigan is such an interesting place and I knew I wanted to write about it.
Are your main characters completely imaginary or do they have some basis in real people? Do they reflect aspects of yourself?
I’m a sucker for the tortured soul so, thankfully, most of my characters are completely imaginary. Of course, they share my likes and dislikes, and my love of history and travel and old homes, but that’s about it. The characters populating my stories are more tormented and larger than life than anything or anyone in my personal reality (and that’s a good thing!).
Did you face any blocks while writing the book, and if so, how did you handle them? If not, what's your secret?
I SO wish I could say no way, not me, never. Alas, I have days when I’m uninspired, or bogged down, or just plain stuck. I wish I had the mental toughness to power through on those days, but I only ever ended up getting nowhere fast.
What has worked for me most reliably is to try something surprising in the story. I’m a plotter, so rather than pushing out an uninspired scene, I might look for a plot twist at the point where I’m stuck. Or, I might let a character go and see what kind of trouble they wander into. So far, they’ve always come through for me and either did something unexpected or said something surprising or revealing. A small spark is all it takes and every time I’ve tried this, I’ve wound up with a more complex plot or a previously undiscovered layer to one of the characters. I’m learning to trust my inner-panster! She’s the best at getting me unstuck.
What have been surprises you've encountered while writing the book and after?
I am constantly amazed at how supportive romance writers are of each other. Maybe my surprise stems from the fact that I come from academia, which is not exactly what I would call supportive. I’ve thought a lot about the differences between the two communities and, for the most part, remain baffled. Maybe the supportiveness in romancelandia is due to the fact we’re a community of mostly women (with more and more men joining all the time!), or maybe it’s because we write to entertain and not to convince or persuade or prove our worthiness for tenure. Maybe it’s because we don’t actually have to compete against each other. I think of those voracious readers. They want more books!
On top of that, I was initially surprised to learn, in contrast to the ridiculous stereotypes of romance readers and writers, we’re an open-minded, highly educated, professional community. Now, I take tremendous pride in belonging to a community that we gives voice to women while at the same time champions fellowship and love. Oh, and we’re HUGE. All the haters can suck it.
One last comment – I’m surprised how hard it is to learn and master craft (is it even possible to “master” craft?), how hard it is to find the time to write (and study and read), and how, even given that difficulty, I can’t stop trying to do all of it anyway. J
What did you learn? For instance, what did you learn about yourself, your process, the writing world; about remote islands and archaeology?
I’ve learned (and continue to learn) an awful lot about the many ways doubt and uncertainty destroy creativity and productivity.
Growing up in Michigan, I didn’t need to do a lot of research on the climate, history, or geography, though I’ve taken full advantage of the excuse to visit Mackinac Island and a number of Michigan’s beautiful coastal towns. Also, I’m a bit of an amateur genealogist and some of my and my husband’s family histories worked their way into the details of Mina’s family history. I’ve worked at two universities, both of which had active archaeology programs where I could observe an excavation and learn about the field.
Tell us about your writing space and how or why it works for you.
I don’t have a designated space. I take my writing with me everywhere I go and squeeze in writing time whenever and wherever I can. My mobile workspace includes a netbook with the manuscript file (which I backup daily) and a notebook where I jot down ideas and scenes. It all fits in my oversized purse and travels with me. At home, I set up any number of places to write - in bed, on the couch, at the dining room table – anywhere I can find some relative quiet!
What are some of your favorite books and why?
There are so, so many books! I love anything written by Susan Elizabeth Phillips, but especially It Had To Be You and Heaven, Texas. Lisa Kleypas (Smooth Talking Stranger, Blue-Eyed Devil) and Julia Quinn (I’ll take any Bridgerton novel, any time) are auto-reads for me. All three authors write with an incredible depth of emotion about characters who are flawed, but honorable, and who always find a way to turn their hurts and disappointments into strengths.
What are you working on now?
I’m editing book two in the Nolan brothers series while also writing book three.
Would you like to try your hand at writing a different genre? Which one and why?
For now, I’m sticking with contemporary romance. Although, I have a dark ages romance about a Welsh-Irish prince and a Pictish princess bandying about inside my head. Maybe someday…
If you were not a writer, what would your dream job be?
A historian. In particular, I find Celtic and British history fascinating. Is it possible to be a professional genealogist? I love to do research and I love researching family histories.
What aspect of writing gives you the most trouble?
I have two: 1.) Starting - sitting my butt in a chair, blocking out the many, many distractions, and putting in the time it takes to write a book – and 2.) editing. I’d rather face the dreaded blank page, where anything is possible, than wrestle with my own words. Having to confront all my doubts and fears about my writing, with no escape, is So Freaking Hard.
Who is your favorite hero/heroine?
I love an underdog and both Penelope Featherington and Evie Jenner come to mind. Both women are insecure and awkward, but also extremely smart and determined with loads of integrity. I relish the way they prove people wrong.
I also adore Sebastian, Lord St. Vincent from Lisa Kleypas’ The Devil In Winter. He’s so naughty, but also extremely vulnerable. He touches my heart, as does Julia Quinn’s charming and easy-going, Colin Bridgerton. On the surface, he appears carefree and playful, but underneath it all, he has a deep-rooted insecurity about his place in the world. It’s probably not a coincidence that both heroes fall for imperfect heroines. *Dreamy sigh*
I have to give a mention to Jamie Fraser! I mean, what’s not to love? He’s smart, loyal, self-assured, honorable and sexy, and he’s a bit of a tortured soul. Oh, my.
A good archaeologist always finds what he’s digging for…
When Mina Winslow buys her ancestral home with plans to restore it to the beautiful sanctuary it once was, she discovers more than she bargained for. Soon, she's face-to-face with a man from her past. The one man she never stopped longing for.
Renowned archaeologist, Noah Nolan, swore he’d never return to the small, remote island in Lake Michigan. After agreeing to complete a short-term excavation project, he realizes the site belongs to the woman who inexplicably rejected him years before. A woman he’s never forgotten – or forgiven.
When Noah’s affinity for uncovering all things lost, forgotten, and buried stirs Mina’s repressed memories of a terrifying secret, she must find the courage to unearth the past, or risk losing the treasure of her heart forever.
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Amy Olle writes sexy contemporary romances filled with hope, heart, and humor. Her first book, Beautiful Ruin, is the first in a series about five Irish-born brothers sent as children to live with family on a remote island off the coast of northern Michigan. She is delighted to put her Psychology degrees to good use writing romance.
Amy lives in Michigan with her long-suffering husband, brilliant son, and (female) turtle named George.
For new releases and giveaways, join Amy’s mailing list. She loves to hear from readers! Connect with her on Twitter and Facebook or contact her at amy@amyolle.com.
When did you first have the thought you'd like to write a book? Was that first thought related to writing romance?
After I finished the long, difficult slog that writing my graduate thesis entailed, I wanted to read something less academic and more entertaining. I picked up Outlander and discovered the genius of romance novels. Oddly enough, Outlander is not shelved in the romance section at bookstores and libraries, so in my hunt for similar works, I read lots of fantastic historical fiction and fantasy. Eventually, I found the romance section and discovered the many brilliant historical romance writers there. I was hooked. I don’t know if you’ve heard (;-)), but romance readers are voracious readers. I can attest to that! After a year and probably a hundred or more romance novels, I’d become that stereotypical budding writer with my head full of elaborate daydreams, mini-stories, or snippets of scenes. One day, while reading a Susan Elizabeth Phillips novel, I thought, I want to write a book like this. Just a pure, simple wish and so, so naïve!
What was your path to getting this book written and published? What type of research did you do?
I wrote Beautiful Ruin, start to finish, at least three separate times. Technically, it’s the first book I’ve written, but in truth, I’ve written three complete manuscripts, all with the same premise and two of which are an abomination to the craft, before producing this last version of Noah and Mina’s story. It took me years to learn story structure (A plot? What’s that? Do I need one?) and to discover my writing process (still discovering). During those years of writing and rewriting, I moved across the country, started a new job - twice, had a baby, and lost my dad to illness. Sometimes, I think about that naïve wish to write a romance novel, and then I start laughing.
Where did the idea for your story come from?
I can’t pinpoint the exact moment this story idea occurred to me. Instead, it sort of evolved over time as I wrote (and rewrote). I knew I wanted to write about a woman struggling with a past trauma, and ultimately, I wanted it to be a story of healing and redemption. From there, I just wrote. Not something I would advise, by the way (see previous answer). J
Why did you pick the setting you did?
I lived in the south (Georgia) for several years while attending graduate school, but I always pined for my home in Michigan. Mainly, I missed my family and friends, but also I missed the little things about the state where I’d grown up. I missed the way it smells. I missed the four distinct, oftentimes intense, seasons. I missed the beaches, the freshwater lakes, the quaint harbor towns. I missed the vibe. We have two Big Ten universities within an hour of each other. Of course, we’re bitter rivals (football and basketball season are particularly exciting!), but it’s created this diverse community of intellects and scholars, students, and working class families. The film industry is growing in the state and has only enriched the already large community of writers and artists. Michigan is such an interesting place and I knew I wanted to write about it.
Are your main characters completely imaginary or do they have some basis in real people? Do they reflect aspects of yourself?
I’m a sucker for the tortured soul so, thankfully, most of my characters are completely imaginary. Of course, they share my likes and dislikes, and my love of history and travel and old homes, but that’s about it. The characters populating my stories are more tormented and larger than life than anything or anyone in my personal reality (and that’s a good thing!).
Did you face any blocks while writing the book, and if so, how did you handle them? If not, what's your secret?
I SO wish I could say no way, not me, never. Alas, I have days when I’m uninspired, or bogged down, or just plain stuck. I wish I had the mental toughness to power through on those days, but I only ever ended up getting nowhere fast.
What has worked for me most reliably is to try something surprising in the story. I’m a plotter, so rather than pushing out an uninspired scene, I might look for a plot twist at the point where I’m stuck. Or, I might let a character go and see what kind of trouble they wander into. So far, they’ve always come through for me and either did something unexpected or said something surprising or revealing. A small spark is all it takes and every time I’ve tried this, I’ve wound up with a more complex plot or a previously undiscovered layer to one of the characters. I’m learning to trust my inner-panster! She’s the best at getting me unstuck.
What have been surprises you've encountered while writing the book and after?
I am constantly amazed at how supportive romance writers are of each other. Maybe my surprise stems from the fact that I come from academia, which is not exactly what I would call supportive. I’ve thought a lot about the differences between the two communities and, for the most part, remain baffled. Maybe the supportiveness in romancelandia is due to the fact we’re a community of mostly women (with more and more men joining all the time!), or maybe it’s because we write to entertain and not to convince or persuade or prove our worthiness for tenure. Maybe it’s because we don’t actually have to compete against each other. I think of those voracious readers. They want more books!
On top of that, I was initially surprised to learn, in contrast to the ridiculous stereotypes of romance readers and writers, we’re an open-minded, highly educated, professional community. Now, I take tremendous pride in belonging to a community that we gives voice to women while at the same time champions fellowship and love. Oh, and we’re HUGE. All the haters can suck it.
One last comment – I’m surprised how hard it is to learn and master craft (is it even possible to “master” craft?), how hard it is to find the time to write (and study and read), and how, even given that difficulty, I can’t stop trying to do all of it anyway. J
What did you learn? For instance, what did you learn about yourself, your process, the writing world; about remote islands and archaeology?
I’ve learned (and continue to learn) an awful lot about the many ways doubt and uncertainty destroy creativity and productivity.
Growing up in Michigan, I didn’t need to do a lot of research on the climate, history, or geography, though I’ve taken full advantage of the excuse to visit Mackinac Island and a number of Michigan’s beautiful coastal towns. Also, I’m a bit of an amateur genealogist and some of my and my husband’s family histories worked their way into the details of Mina’s family history. I’ve worked at two universities, both of which had active archaeology programs where I could observe an excavation and learn about the field.
Tell us about your writing space and how or why it works for you.
I don’t have a designated space. I take my writing with me everywhere I go and squeeze in writing time whenever and wherever I can. My mobile workspace includes a netbook with the manuscript file (which I backup daily) and a notebook where I jot down ideas and scenes. It all fits in my oversized purse and travels with me. At home, I set up any number of places to write - in bed, on the couch, at the dining room table – anywhere I can find some relative quiet!
What are some of your favorite books and why?
There are so, so many books! I love anything written by Susan Elizabeth Phillips, but especially It Had To Be You and Heaven, Texas. Lisa Kleypas (Smooth Talking Stranger, Blue-Eyed Devil) and Julia Quinn (I’ll take any Bridgerton novel, any time) are auto-reads for me. All three authors write with an incredible depth of emotion about characters who are flawed, but honorable, and who always find a way to turn their hurts and disappointments into strengths.
What are you working on now?
I’m editing book two in the Nolan brothers series while also writing book three.
Would you like to try your hand at writing a different genre? Which one and why?
For now, I’m sticking with contemporary romance. Although, I have a dark ages romance about a Welsh-Irish prince and a Pictish princess bandying about inside my head. Maybe someday…
If you were not a writer, what would your dream job be?
A historian. In particular, I find Celtic and British history fascinating. Is it possible to be a professional genealogist? I love to do research and I love researching family histories.
What aspect of writing gives you the most trouble?
I have two: 1.) Starting - sitting my butt in a chair, blocking out the many, many distractions, and putting in the time it takes to write a book – and 2.) editing. I’d rather face the dreaded blank page, where anything is possible, than wrestle with my own words. Having to confront all my doubts and fears about my writing, with no escape, is So Freaking Hard.
Who is your favorite hero/heroine?
I love an underdog and both Penelope Featherington and Evie Jenner come to mind. Both women are insecure and awkward, but also extremely smart and determined with loads of integrity. I relish the way they prove people wrong.
I also adore Sebastian, Lord St. Vincent from Lisa Kleypas’ The Devil In Winter. He’s so naughty, but also extremely vulnerable. He touches my heart, as does Julia Quinn’s charming and easy-going, Colin Bridgerton. On the surface, he appears carefree and playful, but underneath it all, he has a deep-rooted insecurity about his place in the world. It’s probably not a coincidence that both heroes fall for imperfect heroines. *Dreamy sigh*
I have to give a mention to Jamie Fraser! I mean, what’s not to love? He’s smart, loyal, self-assured, honorable and sexy, and he’s a bit of a tortured soul. Oh, my.
A good archaeologist always finds what he’s digging for…
When Mina Winslow buys her ancestral home with plans to restore it to the beautiful sanctuary it once was, she discovers more than she bargained for. Soon, she's face-to-face with a man from her past. The one man she never stopped longing for.
Renowned archaeologist, Noah Nolan, swore he’d never return to the small, remote island in Lake Michigan. After agreeing to complete a short-term excavation project, he realizes the site belongs to the woman who inexplicably rejected him years before. A woman he’s never forgotten – or forgiven.
When Noah’s affinity for uncovering all things lost, forgotten, and buried stirs Mina’s repressed memories of a terrifying secret, she must find the courage to unearth the past, or risk losing the treasure of her heart forever.
Amy Olle writes sexy contemporary romances filled with hope, heart, and humor. Her first book, Beautiful Ruin, is the first in a series about five Irish-born brothers sent as children to live with family on a remote island off the coast of northern Michigan. She is delighted to put her Psychology degrees to good use writing romance.
Amy lives in Michigan with her long-suffering husband, brilliant son, and (female) turtle named George.
For new releases and giveaways, join Amy’s mailing list. She loves to hear from readers! Connect with her on Twitter and Facebook or contact her at amy@amyolle.com.
Tuesday Special: Luanna Stewart
Luanna Stewart
http://www.luannastewart.com/
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When her wealthy art dealer father died, Heather James was expecting a fortune. Instead, his bank account was empty and Heather’s working in a bakery, wondering exactly what happened to her father's millions...until someone tries to kill her.
Tony Simons is on the trail of an art theft cold case that's practically giving him frostbite. He's hoping that by sticking close to Heather—the daughter of his deceased prime suspect—he'll find the answers he needs. Instead, he's finding himself distracted by a gorgeous woman who drives him crazy in every way imaginable…
Now Tony's in serious trouble. Even if Heather can't—or won't—tell him where the stolen paintings and money are, she may well have stolen his heart.
And now someone wants her dead…
Portrait of a Girl is available at: Entangled Publishing
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About Luanna: Luanna Stewart has been creating adventures for her imaginary friends since childhood. As soon as she discovered her grandmother's stash of romance novels, all plots had to lead to a happily-ever-after.
Born and raised in Nova Scotia, Luanna now lives in Maine with her dear husband, two college boys, and two cats. When she's not torturing her heroes and heroines, she’s in her kitchen baking something delicious.
Writing under the pen name Grace Hood, she has two novellas published with The Wild Rose Press. She is excited to have a book published under her own name with Entangled Publishing.
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Dump the Clichés? Will they Still Get It?
The Write Way Café welcomes Ashley York, who discusses tips to avoid telling instead of showing.
When I first started writing full-time, one of my favorite things to do was to try to pick out just the correct words to describe expressions people made. I wanted to catch just the right movements to convey that same emotion because when you experience the person making "the face," the emotion is conveyed without question. My husband's favorite expression is a lopsided grin that sort of tucks in at one corner. His conveyed emotion? Censure. I'd describe it as his "are you really going to say that?" look. And, naturally, my response is "Don't give me that look."
We all want to show and not tell, but how best to go about it?
One of the most common ways is to use what's familiar. And why is it so familiar? Because we've read it over and over and over again. That is the very definition of cliché-overuse. It's easy to slip these in without even realizing it. I've had critique partners "correct" my words to turn them into the well-known cliché. And I said "thank you!" <Smack the forehead> The sentence just seemed to sound right after that. We were familiar with it. We knew what it meant. But STOP! It was a cliche—overused; losing its original impact; trite. Is that really how we want to write? When we spend so much time selecting just the right word? I'd venture a guess and say "NO!" How to avoid it? I admit I'm not always able to avoid them. If there are ten clichés, trust me, there use to be fifty :)
How do your favorite authors avoid writing clichés when they describe expressions and gestures that we all do every day? Please share!
When I first started writing full-time, one of my favorite things to do was to try to pick out just the correct words to describe expressions people made. I wanted to catch just the right movements to convey that same emotion because when you experience the person making "the face," the emotion is conveyed without question. My husband's favorite expression is a lopsided grin that sort of tucks in at one corner. His conveyed emotion? Censure. I'd describe it as his "are you really going to say that?" look. And, naturally, my response is "Don't give me that look."
We all want to show and not tell, but how best to go about it?
One of the most common ways is to use what's familiar. And why is it so familiar? Because we've read it over and over and over again. That is the very definition of cliché-overuse. It's easy to slip these in without even realizing it. I've had critique partners "correct" my words to turn them into the well-known cliché. And I said "thank you!" <Smack the forehead> The sentence just seemed to sound right after that. We were familiar with it. We knew what it meant. But STOP! It was a cliche—overused; losing its original impact; trite. Is that really how we want to write? When we spend so much time selecting just the right word? I'd venture a guess and say "NO!" How to avoid it? I admit I'm not always able to avoid them. If there are ten clichés, trust me, there use to be fifty :)
How do your favorite authors avoid writing clichés when they describe expressions and gestures that we all do every day? Please share!
About Ashley: Aside from two years spent in the wilds
of the Colorado mountains, Ashley York is a proud life-long New
Englander and a hardcore romantic. She has an MA in History which brings
with it, through many years of research, a love for primary documents
and the smell of musty old libraries. With her author's imagination, she
likes to write about people who could have lived alongside those
well-known giants from the past.
Connect with her online:
Email: ashleyyork1066@gmail.com
Twitter: @ashleyyork1066
www.ashleyyorkauthor.com
Connect with her online:
Email: ashleyyork1066@gmail.com
Twitter: @ashleyyork1066
www.ashleyyorkauthor.com
Tuesday Special: Savage Disclosure, Nickie Savage Book 3
R.T.Wolfe
www.RTWolfe.com
Savage Disclosure, Nickie Savage Book 3
Detective Nickie Savage is on the heels of a domestic child trafficking ring—the same one responsible for her own childhood abduction.
When the ringleaders repeatedly slip her grip, Nickie suspects there's a mole funneling information to an outside source and calls upon her new husband, Duncan Reed, to find the leak.
But Nickie needs more than Duncan's photographic memory and computer hacking skills to get back on track. She must make peace with the ghosts of the children she left behind.
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Juggling both the take-out bag from Mikey’s Bar and Grill and the yogurt she snatched from home, Nickie stepped into the elevator and pushed the button to the top floor. Except, this was Northridge, New York, which meant the top floor to the tallest downtown building was a whopping four floors. And yet the man the local newspapers call The Taste of L.A. stayed for her. Here. And bought the top floor of the tallest building to serve as an office he used only part-time.
The doors opened and she stepped into the hallway, her mind still rolling through the roadblocks of her frustrating new case. Duncan had had two sections of wall on each side of the entrance replaced with floor-to-ceiling glass. As she spotted his morning receptionist’s empty chair, Nickie realized how late it was for lunch. Luckily the bag from Mikey’s was heavy.
It wasn’t like her to walk into anyone’s office unannounced, especially when the door was closed. With the absence of his receptionist, Nickie attempted to raise her full hands to knock. The door opened before she had the chance.
Duncan greeted her with a half smile. He took the Mikey’s bag from her, then wrapped his free hand around hers. Twirling her wedding ring between his thumb and forefinger—the habit he’d picked up since their marriage—he leaned in and kissed her softly. The familiar scent of him dove into her lungs and settled next to her heart.
“There you are,” he said just as softly. She blinked three times in order to regain her composure.
Turning, he headed back for his desk with his bag, opening it as he walked.
“Am I so late that you waited by the door for your lunch?” she asked as she sunk into the guest chair on the opposite side of his enormous desk. She lifted a boot, ready to plop it on the top before noticing the polish of the glass and letting it fall to the floor.
Pulling out the over-sized tenderloin from the bag, he gestured to the monitor at the side of his desk. “I saw you on the security cameras.”
Of course.
“Sorry for leaving you hungry. And for the hectic past few days. It doesn’t look like the next few will be any better.”
“Hmm,” he said as he swallowed bites of the French fries, never one to talk with his mouth full. “That it a shame since I haven’t seen you naked in seventy-two hours.”
Opening her half-empty yogurt container, she considered. “What about the other night?” On the stairs. Yum.
“You weren’t naked.”
She smiled. It couldn’t be helped, but it was followed by the frown created from her predicament with her recent case.
“Would you like to talk about it?”
“Hmm? Oh.” She shrugged and dunked some of the blueberries she’d thrown in the container on her way out of the house. “Roadblock on a case. Alleged college rape.”
“You use the word ‘alleged’ often. I know better, but others view this as assumed innocence.”
Another shrug. “Innocent until proven guilty and all that. The girl sounds legit, but no need to throw some bloke under the bus until I have proof. Which is where we come to my roadblock. Statistically, these things don’t come in isolated cases. I’ve got the alleged victim.” Oops. There was that word again. “I’ve got the dude’s ID.” She dug in the pocket of her blouse and pulled out the photo she’d downloaded of him. Waving it around with her free hand, she took another bite before continuing. “I can’t exactly stand in front of his Drama Club practice and show his picture to girls as they leave, making accusations. I’m a NPD detective.”
Duncan set down the burger that so ironically mismatched everything about him and walked around to her. Would the reaction of her heart rate to this kind of simple gesture ever wane? He reached down and placed his hand beneath one of her calves, lifting her leg and setting her boot on top of his desk. Before repeating the process with the other leg, he snatched the photo from between her fingers. “I, however, am not a cop and would enjoy an afternoon on the beautiful Heritage Junior College campus.”
About R.T.: R.T. Wolfe enjoys creating diverse characters and twining them together in the midst of an intelligent mystery and a heart encompassing romance. It's not uncommon to find dark chocolate squares in R.T.'s candy dish, her Golden Retriever at her feet and a few caterpillars spinning their cocoons in their terrariums on her counters. R.T. loves her family, gardening, eagle-watching and can occasionally be found viewing a flyover of migrating whooping cranes.
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First Love Again with Kristina Knight
The Write Way Café welcomes Kristina Knight, an enthusiastic author who may have been an exclamation point in another life.
Tell us a little about First Love Again.
First Love Again is a story about second chances and redemption. Emmett blames himself for something that happened years ago ~ to the point, he hasn't been 'home' in 10 years. Jaime is trying hard to leave the past behind, but the people around her can't let go of what happened. Together, they'll face the past and hopefully find a future together.
If First Love Again was made into a movie, who would play your main characters, and why?
As I was writing the book, I had very specific people in mind! I'd pick Scarlett Johansson for Jaime - because she does feisty but broken so well! - and Joe Manganiello for Emmett because...well, Joe Manganiello.
What or who has been instrumental in or to your writing journey?
There are so many people! I've been incredibly lucky to have a very supportive husband and a core group of real-life friends who not only let me whine when a story isn't going well, but who kick my butt to get the story back on track! They know who they are. :)
What “keepers” are in your home library?
There are SO MANY! And for so many different reasons! I still have my dog-eared copies of the Narnia series because just seeing them on my shelf takes me back to my teenage self and the dreams those books instigated, I have copies of two of my favorite romance books - scammed from my grandmother's book shelf! - and I have several 'keeper' authors whose hardback books will always be on my shelves.
What is your favorite social media? Why?
Instagram! I love Twitter and Facebook, but a lot of the images you see in those places are memes or graphics using professional photography (nothing wrong with that!)...but I love, love Instagram for the simple reason that the pictures I see there are, for the most part, real pictures take in real time by real people.
And now for the fun stuff!
If you were a punctuation mark, what would you be?
Exclamation Mark..because I get overly excited. Some people would say about nothing. I disagree.
What is your biggest shopping downfall?
Bags and shoes. I'm a HUGE Dooney & Bourke fan and a Vera Bradley fan...I've got more bags from those 2 designers than, probably, 5 people would need...but I love them.
Are you a glass half empty or glass half full personality?
Glass half full...some would call me a Pollyanna. I prefer Optimist.
Are you a dog/cat/other person?
Dog! I love my Hazel (she's a shih tzu) and so silly!
What is your favorite season and why?
Fall, because of all the color...no, Summer because beach-time. But I can't forget about snow days in Winter (and we get a lot up here!), so Winter. Wait a sec, with snow days come weeks of sub-zero temperatures. I'll go with Spring, because it's a little bit of all three - warm like summer but without those 100 degree days, colorful like fall and still crisp in the early mornings and evenings like the beginning of winter.
Tell us a little about First Love Again.
First Love Again is a story about second chances and redemption. Emmett blames himself for something that happened years ago ~ to the point, he hasn't been 'home' in 10 years. Jaime is trying hard to leave the past behind, but the people around her can't let go of what happened. Together, they'll face the past and hopefully find a future together.
If First Love Again was made into a movie, who would play your main characters, and why?
As I was writing the book, I had very specific people in mind! I'd pick Scarlett Johansson for Jaime - because she does feisty but broken so well! - and Joe Manganiello for Emmett because...well, Joe Manganiello.
What or who has been instrumental in or to your writing journey?
There are so many people! I've been incredibly lucky to have a very supportive husband and a core group of real-life friends who not only let me whine when a story isn't going well, but who kick my butt to get the story back on track! They know who they are. :)
What “keepers” are in your home library?
There are SO MANY! And for so many different reasons! I still have my dog-eared copies of the Narnia series because just seeing them on my shelf takes me back to my teenage self and the dreams those books instigated, I have copies of two of my favorite romance books - scammed from my grandmother's book shelf! - and I have several 'keeper' authors whose hardback books will always be on my shelves.
What is your favorite social media? Why?
Instagram! I love Twitter and Facebook, but a lot of the images you see in those places are memes or graphics using professional photography (nothing wrong with that!)...but I love, love Instagram for the simple reason that the pictures I see there are, for the most part, real pictures take in real time by real people.
And now for the fun stuff!
If you were a punctuation mark, what would you be?
Exclamation Mark..because I get overly excited. Some people would say about nothing. I disagree.
What is your biggest shopping downfall?
Bags and shoes. I'm a HUGE Dooney & Bourke fan and a Vera Bradley fan...I've got more bags from those 2 designers than, probably, 5 people would need...but I love them.
Are you a glass half empty or glass half full personality?
Glass half full...some would call me a Pollyanna. I prefer Optimist.
Are you a dog/cat/other person?
Dog! I love my Hazel (she's a shih tzu) and so silly!
What is your favorite season and why?
Fall, because of all the color...no, Summer because beach-time. But I can't forget about snow days in Winter (and we get a lot up here!), so Winter. Wait a sec, with snow days come weeks of sub-zero temperatures. I'll go with Spring, because it's a little bit of all three - warm like summer but without those 100 degree days, colorful like fall and still crisp in the early mornings and evenings like the beginning of winter.
Coming back to Gulliver Island after a ten-year absence to take care of his father should have been simple. Emmett Deal would fix and sell the family home, and return to Cincinnati with his ailing father in tow. Yet something compels him to stay a little longer. The beautiful, bright eyes of Jaime Brown.
Ten years ago, traumatic events changed the course of Jaime's life forever, catching her in a small-town life she can't escape. Emmett's return stirs up the memories she wanted to ignore ... and dreams she had forgotten. Now she finds herself with a rare opportunity - a second chance. Only this time, it's not just for love...
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About Kristina: Once upon a time, Kristina Knight spent her days running from car crash to fire to meetings with local police--no, she wasn't a troublemaker, she was a journalist. Her career took her all over the United States, writing about everything from a serial killer's capture to the National Finals Rodeo. Along the way she found her very own Knight in Shining Cowboy Boots and an abiding love for romance novels. And just like the characters from her favorite books, she's living her own happily ever after. Kristina writes sassy contemporary romance novels; her books have appeared on Kindle Best Seller Lists. She loves hearing from readers, so drop her a line!
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Ten years ago, traumatic events changed the course of Jaime's life forever, catching her in a small-town life she can't escape. Emmett's return stirs up the memories she wanted to ignore ... and dreams she had forgotten. Now she finds herself with a rare opportunity - a second chance. Only this time, it's not just for love...
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About Kristina: Once upon a time, Kristina Knight spent her days running from car crash to fire to meetings with local police--no, she wasn't a troublemaker, she was a journalist. Her career took her all over the United States, writing about everything from a serial killer's capture to the National Finals Rodeo. Along the way she found her very own Knight in Shining Cowboy Boots and an abiding love for romance novels. And just like the characters from her favorite books, she's living her own happily ever after. Kristina writes sassy contemporary romance novels; her books have appeared on Kindle Best Seller Lists. She loves hearing from readers, so drop her a line!
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Tuesday Special: Ashley York and The Gentle Knight
Ashley York
www.ashleyyorkauthor.com
A medieval soldier returns home to find his lover died in childbirth just as his own mother had. Believing he is cursed, Peter of Normandy turns from love. When he must give escort to an Irish princess more noble than many knights, he struggles with his decision to live a solitary life. Can he take the chance that his love won't be a death sentence and possibly make them stronger?
Padraig MacNaughton's death bed decree rips his daughter, Brighit, from the shelter of her protective clan in Ireland. Forced to take vows at a Priory in England, she finds herself in the hands of lecherous mercenaries with their own agendas. Dare she trust the Norman knight to see her safely to her new life as a nun? Even when she finds in him the fulfillment of all she's ever wanted?
Or will honor and duty eclipse their one chance for happiness?
Excerpt:
"What. Will. It. Be?" He leaned in closer, whispering each word.
"Whatever you think best?" She spoke as calmly as she could but the room was getting very hot.
He glanced up as if trying to read an unclear sign but then that assured smile returned.
A tiny quiver rippled through her. Before she could speak again, he was closing in on her, his body up against hers.
"Whatever I think best?"
She wavered for a moment, unsure why he answered her with that tone. She wanted nothing more than to melt against him, envelope herself in his heat. This was just like in her dream. Hot and heady.
Then his firm lips were on hers. His hard length pressing her into the table, as if trying to meld them together. Her body would gladly have done just that if only it could have turned to pure liquid instead of just a growing warmth where his hips grinded into her.
He pulled his head back enough to search her face. He was breathing hard. He looked bewildered. "Is this what you want then?"
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About Ashley: Aside from two years spent in the wilds of the Colorado mountains, Ashley York is a proud life-long New Englander and a hardcore romantic. She has an MA in History which brings with it, through many years of research, a love for primary documents and the smell of musty old libraries. With her author's imagination, she likes to write about people who could have lived alongside those well-known giants from the past.
Connect with her online:
Email: ashleyyork1066@gmail.com
Twitter: @ashleyyork1066
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